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popkin16Edited my profile today. It looks much prettier now! Essi has been influencing me; I'm always looking for pretty things now. ILU ESSI!
I've stalled on my fics. I have a handle on the plot, and I think I understand the characters and their motives, but DIALOGUE. I'll write a scene between Rodney and John and go, "How would they say that? Would they even say it?" and then I get frustrated and give up. Until I can overcome this problem, there will be no SGA fics from me. I'm thinking of seeking help, but from where? And how?
When will Zoro return to One Piece? I MISS HIM SO. Where is my marimo?
I have lost most of my interest in KHR, mostly because of the future!arc. It got boring a long time ago, and I stubbornly continued with the hope that it would get better -- it hasn't.
And xxxHolic isn't going so well either -- I want my Watanuki back! He's this weird crossbreed between his old self and Yuuko, and I can't say I'm fond of it so far. I miss all the flailing and yelling.
Watch this video -- it's full of lawls and win (and unrelated to fandom).
I've stalled on my fics. I have a handle on the plot, and I think I understand the characters and their motives, but DIALOGUE. I'll write a scene between Rodney and John and go, "How would they say that? Would they even say it?" and then I get frustrated and give up. Until I can overcome this problem, there will be no SGA fics from me. I'm thinking of seeking help, but from where? And how?
When will Zoro return to One Piece? I MISS HIM SO. Where is my marimo?
I have lost most of my interest in KHR, mostly because of the future!arc. It got boring a long time ago, and I stubbornly continued with the hope that it would get better -- it hasn't.
And xxxHolic isn't going so well either -- I want my Watanuki back! He's this weird crossbreed between his old self and Yuuko, and I can't say I'm fond of it so far. I miss all the flailing and yelling.
Watch this video -- it's full of lawls and win (and unrelated to fandom).
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Date: 2009-10-30 04:21 am (UTC)ILL FORCE YOU BACK TO KHR, YOU JUST WAIT AND SEE >|
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Date: 2009-10-30 04:35 am (UTC)PLEASE DO, I WOULD LOVE TO GO BACK. THE CHARACTERS ARE AWESOME!
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Date: 2009-10-30 08:40 am (UTC)UGH, DIALOGUE. I JUST HATE IT. no, seriously, that's what's always bothering me the most in my own fics. sometimes i just can't get a grip of it, especially if the fic is more dialogue-centred. but i'd be happy to help you, if you'd like! perhaps a second opinion might help you out a bit. :)
and WATANUKI. i'm still woefully behind, but i've read things and asd;afjls WHERE BE MY FLAILY SPAZZY WATANUKI. D: DOUMEKI CAN'T DO IT WITHOUT HIM. HIS HAIRY CHEST!BEAST WILL BE UNLEASHED UPON THE WORLD, AND LO, DID THE WORLD FALL INTO DARKNESS.
:D :D :D
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Date: 2009-11-01 01:09 am (UTC)I've never noticed anything off in your dialogue; you do a wonderful job. It helps that you seem to have a real grasp on your characters too. You get their way of thinking and motivations and everything that makes them who they are. I would *love* to take you up on your offer of help. So I'll do the best I can on my fics, and then send them to you. You can read them over, and point out where I'm so very wrong :) Does that, er, is that okay with you?
YES, WHERE DID HE GO? WHAT HAS CLAMP DONE TO HIM. AS;KDJ;ASKDJ;AKSDPBI[E BEWARE THE HAIRY CHEST!BEAST, FOR IT WILL COME FOR YOU AND...AND SWALLOW YOUR SOUL. AND LO, DID THE WORLD FALL INTO DARKNESS. I CHOKED ON MY SODA READING THAT. WINWINWIN!
XDDD
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Date: 2009-11-01 01:40 am (UTC)asd;aljlksd really? that's a relief. i'm always really nervous about it, because it often just sounds so ... clumsy to me. AND YAY! that's perfect, i'll be looking forward to your fics. :)
AND THUS IT WAS, ON THE DARKENING DAYS OF THE ARMAGEDDON, WHEN ALL OF MANKINDS' SOULS WERE IN TERRIBLE DANGER OF BEING SWALLOWED BY THE HAIRY CHEST!BEAST (lolol he so would swallow them xDDD), THAT WATANUKI AWOKE FROM THE FUCKED UP WORLD OF SPACE TIME WITCHES, AND HE DID LOOK UPON THE WORLD AND SAW THAT THE END WAS NIGH. HE DECIDED, FRANKLY, "FUCK THIS BULLSHIT, I'M GONNA BLOW THIS POPSICLE STAND." AND SO DID HE DO, AND LO, LIGHT FELL UPON THE WORLD ONCE MORE, AND ALL WAS WELL WHEN WATANUKI TAMED THE BEAST WITH HIS ... MAD SKILLZ.
OH GOD WHAT AM I DOING. I'LL GO TO SLEEP NOW OKAY YES.
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Date: 2009-11-04 02:14 am (UTC)Yes, really! It's conversations like these that remind me that it's easier to see the flaws in your own work than anyone elses. Okay, great! I have quite a few going, actually, I can't seem to focus on just one :(
AND THUS THE UNICORNS AND RAINBOWS AND SPARKLES RETURNED, THOUGH THE UNICORNS STAYED AWAY FROM WATANUKI AND DOUMEKI, BECAUSE REALLY. AND LIFE RETURNED TO MUCH AS IT WAS BEFORE, EXCEPT THE PRETTY HIMAWARI-CHAN COULD NOW GIGGLE ABOUT HER FRIENDS BEING "SUCH GOOD BOYFRIENDS!"
I THOUGHT IT WAS WONDERFUL. FATIGUE DOES CRACKY THINGS TO YOUR MIND, I SEE.
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Date: 2009-11-04 02:33 pm (UTC)yeah, that's true. besides, everyone's always more critical about their own works than anyone else's. not many are ever fully satisfied with what they've done. asd;alkjfds yes, that's my problem too, along with the continuing writer's block. but i guess it's better than having none at all going, though.
AND LO, DID WATANUKI COOK DOUMEKI DINNER EVERYDAY, AND DOUMEKI DID SO ENJOY IT THAT HE OFTEN RAVISHED WATANUKI IN ORDER TO GET HUNGRY AGAIN. AND WATANUKI DID COOK HIM DINNER ANEW, THOUGH LET IT NOT BE SAID HE WAS PARTICULARLY HAPPY ABOUT IT. AND SO LIFE WENT ON, AND ALL WAS WELL.
IT DOES. IT REALLY REALLY DOES.
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Date: 2009-11-04 02:39 pm (UTC)mm, so true. i'm never satisfied by my work *shrug* YES. Though it can be bad to have several fics started, and then get writer's block, because then they sit there and mock you!
ALL REALLY WAS WELL, THOUGH THE HAIRY!CHEST BEAST DOTH LURK, WAITING FOR HIS NEXT CHANCE AT FREEDOM....
XDD I *LOVE* IT THOUGH
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Date: 2009-11-05 11:45 am (UTC)oh god, yes. that's pretty much me right now, the having many fics going but not being able to write even a line for any of them. it's just so frustrating, and YES, THEY MOCK. THEY MOCK SO HARD.
AND INDEED, THE DAY DID COME WHEN THE HAIRY!CHEST BEAST COULD NO LONGER BE CONTAINED WITHIN DOUMEKI'S MANLY MUSCLED CHEST, AND IT BURST FORTH IN A FIT OF RAGE AND PASSION, AND LEFT A RAVISHED WATANUKI IN ITS WAKE, DAZED AND COMPLETELY PASSED OUT FROM ALL THE AWESOME MOLESTING.
:D :D :D INORITE. ME TOO. :D
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Date: 2009-10-30 10:04 am (UTC)And I abandoned KHR a while back, but caught up the other week. A couple of the recent chapters have some of the crack!tastic humour back, so I refuse to give up all hope, lol.
One Piece has never stopped being consistantly awesome for me. Zoro will turn up eventually :P
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Date: 2009-11-01 12:25 am (UTC)loverfriend back to the way he was.Oh? Is it worth catching up on then? THE CRACK!TASTIC HUMOR HAS RETURNED, YOU SAY? *glomp* That makes me so happy~ Maybe there is hope!
Oh, One Piece is stilling pwning n00bs left and right, for sure. I just miss my favorite character. Hahaha, later probably than sooner, since he'll get lost *rolls eyes* XDD