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nihilvanum's words:
my dear
the problem is that
you love him so much
you would allow him
to drag you all the way to hell
if it meant you could
hold his hand
on the way down
the problem is that
you love him so much
you would allow him
to drag you all the way to hell
if it meant you could
hold his hand
on the way down
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Date: 2009-11-01 01:09 am (UTC)I've never noticed anything off in your dialogue; you do a wonderful job. It helps that you seem to have a real grasp on your characters too. You get their way of thinking and motivations and everything that makes them who they are. I would *love* to take you up on your offer of help. So I'll do the best I can on my fics, and then send them to you. You can read them over, and point out where I'm so very wrong :) Does that, er, is that okay with you?
YES, WHERE DID HE GO? WHAT HAS CLAMP DONE TO HIM. AS;KDJ;ASKDJ;AKSDPBI[E BEWARE THE HAIRY CHEST!BEAST, FOR IT WILL COME FOR YOU AND...AND SWALLOW YOUR SOUL. AND LO, DID THE WORLD FALL INTO DARKNESS. I CHOKED ON MY SODA READING THAT. WINWINWIN!
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