thrall

Feb. 12th, 2012 09:25 pm
popkin16: (♥ love is friendship set on fire)
[personal profile] popkin16

pairing: mcshep

shh just go with it

*

John has a thing for Rodney's hands and arms. He doesn't know why, has never had any particular feeling for those body parts on anybody else, but Rodney wearing short-sleeved shirts drives John to distraction. The curl of his fingers, the bones of his wrists, his smooth forearms and strong upper arms - he repeatedly, helplessly traces them with his eyes. He wants to trace the curve Rodney's fingers form, feel the wedding ring warmed by Rodney's body; he wants to wrap his own fingers firmly around Rodney's wrist, forcing him to stillness: all the better to admire those forearms, light hair and even lighter skin.

John isn't good with words, especially not those to express feelings. He's constantly stymied, unable to find the words to express himself. John knows why he loves Rodney as a whole, could write down reasons and situations that endeared Rodney McKay to him, but he's helpless against the lust and affection he feels upon viewing those hands, those arms. He just wants, indefinable and unyielding.

Rodney was yanking the microphone away from his minion now, the inter-departmental meeting slipping off topic as the scientists argue about who-knows-what, fingers wrapped around the grip, muscles flexing as he forgets he's holding it, ranting and waving his hands, the microphone rendered useless against Rodney McKay's need to move and express.

John should be paying attention, knows that his husband will rant and complain in their quarters later, expecting John to keep up. But Rodney's rubbing his thumb against the plastic grip absentmindedly, listening to his sister speak, rolling his hand in a wordless 'yes, yes, hurry up', drawing the eye to his wrist, and John wants. John looks away, peeks back, silent and held in thrall.

He wants.



yep.

Date: 2012-02-13 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neevebrody.livejournal.com
Mmmmm, nice! And this goes perfectly with that delicious pic. Thrall, indeed, and who could blame John...

Date: 2012-02-13 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neevebrody.livejournal.com
but whenever a picture of David shows up and he's wearing short-sleeves, I cannot look away.

I totally agree with this!!

(and thank you)

Date: 2012-02-13 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theladymore.livejournal.com
MOTHER OF GOD! I have an arm fetish it was hot!! I want to see more writing from you missy!

Date: 2012-02-13 03:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theladymore.livejournal.com
It kind of goes hand and hand with my bondage fetish. Glad I'm not the only one either.

Date: 2012-02-13 02:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thebiggest-lie.livejournal.com
Oh, hello. The first thing I must comment on is that this is the first time I am reading your writing and, wow! You have such a nice handle on description and bringing across a mood. Truly lovely writing. I would adore seeing you take on something long, because you clearly have the chops!

And as for the fic itself, this was completely adorbs and made me smile so much; especially that last paragraph.

Date: 2012-02-13 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thebiggest-lie.livejournal.com
You best believe it because I am the magical citar who only speaks the truth~

I always agonize over every word

That, my dear, is the sign of a true writer.

Date: 2012-02-13 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ember-firedrake.livejournal.com
fjdjfdklajfkdl;s John's feels...I know those feels XD Reading this made me all flaily. Hnnnnnn.

♥♥♥

Date: 2012-02-13 05:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elayna88.livejournal.com
Very sexy and very evocative!

Date: 2012-02-13 11:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/sapphirestar_/
IS THAT MELISSA!FIC I SEE

ooaslkjflds;alkjfdkls rodney's handssssssssss

so lovely ♥

Date: 2012-02-13 01:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melagan.livejournal.com
*whimper* I understand John's wants completely.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for this story.

Date: 2012-02-29 08:14 am (UTC)

Date: 2012-02-29 08:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freekydj.livejournal.com
OMG, yes!!! He is quite captivating in short sleeves , isn't he? I loved the mood this evokes, too.

Date: 2012-02-29 08:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] omg-wtf-yeah.livejournal.com
Ahh! You got me! I was reading "wedding ring" and thought "NOOO!!" but then you turned it around on me! Yay! ;)! This was so cute.

Date: 2012-03-04 05:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] omg-wtf-yeah.livejournal.com
Ohh, me too. They're so my OTP. :D

Date: 2012-02-29 09:10 am (UTC)

Date: 2012-02-29 02:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] romennim.livejournal.com
wow. you made me really feel John's emotions and wants.. it was as if I were John..
really good work!

Date: 2012-02-29 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanted-a-pony.livejournal.com
OM nom nom nom! Any time I see a pic that showcases DH's arms or hands or shoulders I want to eat him up with a spoon. I love ficlets like this, that feature John appreciating & enjoying Rodney's, um, attributes.

As;jal;fjdh Warm gold wedding ring! Husbands! * sigh * <3 <3 <3
Thanks very much for writing & sharing this little fic of lovely!


(BTW, I feel that Rodney's wrists + smoothly-finished brown leathers cuffs = OTP. Those forearms & biceps were made to twist & flex & tug against restraints.... ;-)

nihilvanum's words:

my dear
the problem is that
you love him so much
you would allow him
to drag you all the way to hell
if it meant you could
hold his hand
on the way down

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