Beta, please?

[popkin16]

Is someone willing to beta a one-shot for me? It's sort of long, but what I'm having problems with is my tenses. I'll explain more to the person who agree's to help, because I don't want to give too much away. >_> 

It's a One Piece fanfic (this shouldn't really surprise anybody), and whoever volunteers first will probably be the one I go with.

If anybody agree's, that is.