popkin16: (☂ a love like that)
popkin16 ([personal profile] popkin16) wrote2012-05-09 09:54 pm
Entry tags:

mix that means home

mckay/sheppard
293 words
Thanks for all the encouragement in the previous post! unbeta'd.
Summary: It's kind of a ritual now.



John tries to keep it to the difficult days - days when a number of his people died, when his team barely escaped a deadly situation by the seat of their pants. He likes to wait until Rodney is relaxed in bed, book in hand, and he scoots down, wrap his arms around Rodney's belly and press his face into the warm, soft place, breathe Rodney in and know that he is safe. Rodney scratches John’s scalp and then runs his fingers through the thick hair, over and over, a cyclical habit of comfort. John arches into it, hums and nuzzles, a human version of a cat’s kneading.

­John likes to press the tip of his nose into the dip of Rodney’s belly button, and Rodney’s belly trembles, because even if the man won’t admit it, he’s slightly ticklish. Rodney gently tugs on John’s hair in retaliation, and John is helpless against the smile that curls his lips, pressed against Rodney’s skin. John drags his nose up, delighting in Rodney’s entire body shaking now, the involuntary curl Rodney makes, shoulders briefly lifting off the pillow supporting them, a pointless defense against that which tickles him.

By now Rodney knows what’s coming, will move his book to one hand, granting John complete access. John runs his nose along Rodney’s collarbone, licks it, nibbles on it a little, and John feels the sense of warmth and comfort and Rodney, that mix that means home, means happiness, and John will collapse slowly sideways, half on top of Rodney, body pressed against body. He sighs, closes his eyes, dozes as he listens to Rodney mumble in reaction to what he’s reading.

John tries to keep these things to days that are difficult, but sometimes it’s damn near impossible.



[identity profile] aadarshinah.livejournal.com 2012-05-10 03:43 am (UTC)(link)
*blushes*

thanks. What adjective would you like to make yours then? delightful?

[identity profile] aadarshinah.livejournal.com 2012-05-10 03:49 am (UTC)(link)
That works then.

Your ficlet was delightful. As are you.

[identity profile] aadarshinah.livejournal.com 2012-05-10 03:56 am (UTC)(link)
I only tell the truth. You've no idea how much I enjoy our little comment-conversations.

Actually, considering I watched 15 SG1 epsiodes today, you might.

[identity profile] aadarshinah.livejournal.com 2012-05-10 04:04 am (UTC)(link)
Some on the tredmill... the rest while doing working on a puzzle. And it's only, what? 11 hours.

God. That's just sad.

[identity profile] aadarshinah.livejournal.com 2012-05-11 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
Well, it's something alright.

[identity profile] elayna88.livejournal.com 2012-05-10 05:10 am (UTC)(link)
This was adorable. So very sweet and romantic.

[identity profile] cjoelle.livejournal.com 2012-05-10 08:47 am (UTC)(link)
Such a nice picture ♥

[identity profile] wanted-a-pony.livejournal.com 2012-05-10 12:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwww. So tender & romantic; but sad that John feels he can only do this after awful-terrible things happen.... I adore the image of Rodney reading while scritching John like a cat, & also the one of John snuzzling up Rodney's abdomen while Rodney curls up & fights giggles! <3 <3 <3

This is just concentrated loveliness. Thanks for writing & sharing it with us!

[identity profile] wanted-a-pony.livejournal.com 2012-05-10 01:17 pm (UTC)(link)
P.S.—have you considered copying or linking to this at [livejournal.com profile] esteefee's Multifandom Hugfest 2012? While you don't specifically use the word hug the ficlet clearly qualifies in a wonderful way!

[personal profile] hoktauri 2012-05-10 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Oh, John. I'm sure Rodney wouldn't mind if this activity bled into the non-difficult days as well.

[identity profile] sgamadison.livejournal.com 2012-05-11 01:25 am (UTC)(link)
Awwww. *makes me smile so hard*

[identity profile] lazy-8s.livejournal.com 2012-05-11 01:41 am (UTC)(link)

Gorgeous!! I love the idea that John feels the safest and most content, cuddling with Rodney. And, you included his worship of Rodney's belly. These are the best kinds of fic! :)

[identity profile] thebiggest-lie.livejournal.com 2012-05-11 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
GAAAAH this was so sweet and in character and I just loved it. You captured John SO SO SO SO WELL. <333

[identity profile] ami-ven.livejournal.com 2012-05-11 04:34 am (UTC)(link)
This is wonderful! I love happy domestic snuggle fic *g*

[identity profile] melagan.livejournal.com 2012-05-11 05:50 am (UTC)(link)
;;;;;ALL THE HEARTS;;;;;

[identity profile] selenic76.livejournal.com 2012-05-11 04:38 pm (UTC)(link)
♥♥♥! One of the best things in a relationship, are all the small things we do, that we do with no-one else. Wonderful fic, thank you.
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[personal profile] runpunkrun 2012-05-11 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent snuggling!

[identity profile] melodysparks.livejournal.com 2012-05-13 07:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Snuggling and cuddling what more can you ask for. Lovely
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[personal profile] squidgiepdx 2012-05-14 06:36 pm (UTC)(link)
What a beautiful picture you've painted here. ::happy sigh::