ASD;ALJFDL;ALJFD YOUR PROFILE OH MY GOSH. *stares* it's so pretty, eeee ♥ it looks so neat and light and prettyprettypretty, asd;aljfds. awesome! :D ILU BACK!
UGH, DIALOGUE. I JUST HATE IT. no, seriously, that's what's always bothering me the most in my own fics. sometimes i just can't get a grip of it, especially if the fic is more dialogue-centred. but i'd be happy to help you, if you'd like! perhaps a second opinion might help you out a bit. :)
and WATANUKI. i'm still woefully behind, but i've read things and asd;afjls WHERE BE MY FLAILY SPAZZY WATANUKI. D: DOUMEKI CAN'T DO IT WITHOUT HIM. HIS HAIRY CHEST!BEAST WILL BE UNLEASHED UPON THE WORLD, AND LO, DID THE WORLD FALL INTO DARKNESS.
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UGH, DIALOGUE. I JUST HATE IT. no, seriously, that's what's always bothering me the most in my own fics. sometimes i just can't get a grip of it, especially if the fic is more dialogue-centred. but i'd be happy to help you, if you'd like! perhaps a second opinion might help you out a bit. :)
and WATANUKI. i'm still woefully behind, but i've read things and asd;afjls WHERE BE MY FLAILY SPAZZY WATANUKI. D: DOUMEKI CAN'T DO IT WITHOUT HIM. HIS HAIRY CHEST!BEAST WILL BE UNLEASHED UPON THE WORLD, AND LO, DID THE WORLD FALL INTO DARKNESS.
:D :D :D